STAR**** **OOP**S: A Surreal Space Poetry Project – Page 8

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The seconds follow

Faster

They get under you, throw you.

Confusion, yours

Is firm.

It lasts long, and longer

And,

Then it’s gone.

 

Now you have

Nothing.

Unable to decide.

Without reflection,

Without company.

 

No help gained

By staying.

 

Cut the straps and

See.

Its a scanned page!
This poem has a person! And they’re not dying. Though they may feel as if they are. The pressures and anxieties of life can seem like worse than death at times. It doesn’t really seem to matter who you are or what class you happen to be a part of. It’s part of being human. Letting go of the fact that you’re finite both spatially and temporally is terrifying. It’s also freeing…

STAR*** **OOP**S: A Surreal Space Poetry Project – Page 7

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The planet

Punched, blown

Out,

Dispersed.

 

The atmosphere

Down. Near

Zero

 

Burned away.

Burned off.

The sky?

Junk.

No people in this one and nothing dying. Just a blasted planet. Was it too close to it’s own sun? Did it’s atmosphere get caught up by a interstellar object travelling across it’s orbit? Did something terrible happen there long ago? Who knows… rock and stone never reveal their secrets.

STAR*** **OOP**S: A Surreal Space Poetry Project – Page 6

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Snap
The cartridge bumps

(An odd
Sound)

Into the firing
Chamber

Hits,
Then…

Nothing,
Free,
Weightless,
Wrong,

Dead. 

  I’m beginning to notice a focus in these poems: Death. I think I need to focus on making these poems more surreal and less and morbid.

STAR*** **OOP**S: A Surreal Space Poetry Project – Page 5

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Alone,

I resented the
Darkness.

Knowing that,
Anyhow,
You’ll die
Helpless.

Th[e] endless
Dark,

Forgotten,

Dead.

 

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