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I guess I(‘)m
Empty, alone
Stopped
Far out
In the light
Behind the stars
As far away…
The last One
Sent careless(ly)
Over
Lone, probably insane, astronuat sent out into the abysses between the stars. Slowly his mind begins to eat itself.
He trusts no one, not even himself
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Hear, blink, pick
Up I never landed.
With red around
The Others
At least
I could quit.
Concentrate on
Anywhere.
Start rampaging,
Without fear,
Hitting at doubt.
Rattled, and
Half paralyzed.
Yeah, I’m not really sure what happened here… Though it certainly fits the source material.
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Daylight
Bare, queasy
Seconds
Hit.
They
Tangle,
Scatter,
Jump,
I was
Trying
To commit…
Maybe
Trying to
Something…
Whatever it
Was.
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outdoors
looking
flash,dazzle
blink(ing) hard
my eyes
toasted
anxiety
second
second
second
half a dozen…
(blackness)
All te right elements were there! Sudden blindness is probably one of the most horrifying things I could imagine. The poem doesn’t convey that though…
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