STAR**** **OOP**S: A Surreal Space Poetry Project – Page 11

Thanks to Teg for helping with the image!

Thanks to Teg for the image manipulation

 

miles outside
sweeping [up]
moving
fast

 

speed
saves you

 

straight,
forward,
leap,
advance

 

seconds

 

and kiss [the sun]
on [the] way

 

fanning
flame[s]
fire [and] luck

 

brilliance
cosmic
clean

 

There were lots of movement words on this page and I wanted to use them. I thought they fit an eagle or a hawk and perhaps the emotions and feelings that it might feel as it soared. It's a little abstract but trying to translate another species emotions will do that to language...
There were lots of movement words on this page and I wanted to use them. I thought they fit an eagle or a hawk and perhaps the emotions and feelings that it might feel as it soared. It’s a little abstract but trying to translate another species emotions will do that to language…

Author: Jonathon

Would rather be out swimming, running, or camping. Works in state government. Spent a youth reading genre-fiction; today, he is making up for it by reading large quantities of non-fiction literature. The fact that truth, in every way, is more fascinating than fiction still tickles him.

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